Draw the Line with Language and Write More Creatively

Enduring Decision

Over the years, I’ve forgotten where I came across many of my writing principles. So, I’m glad the Insecure Writer’s Support Group (IWSG) inspired a walk down memory lane with this question: In your writing, where do you draw the line with language?

Words Matter

My life, spanning sixteen US presidents, has produced countless memories. Encounters with relatives and drill sergeants punctuating sentences with crude words and colorful insults failed to sear shut my ears, but those phrases corrupted my speech like a malignant cancer.

Like a parrot perched on the shoulder of a foul-mouthed sailor, I repeated those crude words. Decades later, I came to a crossroads in my life, and made an enduring decision to stop thinking and talking like a guttermouth.

Clean Reads from Best-selling Authors

As my mind and mouth adjusted to life without crude language, reading habits changed. I came across best-selling authors who never used profanity but wrote stories filled with intriguing people and exciting plots.

Louis L’Amour, author of over 100 books, emphasized you don’t have to use course language to sell books.

“I’ve written all these stories without any pornography, without any obscenity. I grew up among sailors and miners and lumberjacks and the roughest kind men in the world, but I never found it necessary to use all that in the stories. I can make them real without that. I think much of that kind of writing is a coverup for lack of real skill.”

Clive Cussler

After reading thirty-plus books by Cussler, I don’t recall one where he used off-color language. If you’re not familiar with his novels, Dirk Pitt and his sidekick apply justice to evil villains engaged in espionage, murder, and mayhem. So given the topics, Cussler wrote creatively, giving readers excitement without R-rated content.

Erle Stanley Gardner

Author of the Perry Mason novels and sales of over 170 million books, Gardner gave his fans the fun of figuring out how the innocent victim would triumph over evil. But like Cussler, this must have kept Gardner busy dreaming up creative ways to show sensitive topics without going outside the PG boundaries.

Give Characters a Code of Conduct

For example, Gardner gave Perry Mason a code governing his thoughts, choices, words, and behaviors.

I want to make my hero a fighter, not by having him be ruthless with women and underlings, but by having him wade into the opposition and battle his way through to victory. … the character I am trying to create for him is that of a fighter who is possessed of infinite patience. He tries to jockey his enemies into a position where he can deliver one good knockout punch. Central to these novels is the idea of loyalty — Mason’s loyalty to clients and to the truth; Drake and Street’s loyalty to Mason. Such loyalty is integral to the code of King Arthur’s round table, and the Three Musketeers, whose motto is ‘All for one and one for all.’

Perry Mason — incorruptible, clever, dedicated, dogged — slots nicely into the Arthurian mould. His ‘grail quest’ is the pursuit of justice on behalf of innocents unable to defend themselves; his jousting field is a courtroom. He is never unseated.

Mason’s character was no prude, but in over 80 books, he remained true to the code of conduct established by Gardner.

Increase Your Creativity and Skills

Raymond Chandler died in 1959, but his books are still popular and influence today’s writers. His hard-boiled detective novels dealt with people challenged by sordid criminals. Regardless of the topic, Chandler kept language and descriptions within the range of PG films, but keep in mind the content of his novels reflected cultural attitudes toward race, genders, and lifestyles prevalent in the 30s, 40s, and 50s.

Chandler’s Creative Use of Similes

Without profane words in the opening scene of The Big Sleep (1939), Chandler used similes to describe the salacious female character central to the topics of pornography, blackmail, and murder. For example:

  • She bit her lip and turned her head a little and looked at me along her eyes. Then she lowered her lashes until they almost cuddled her cheeks and slowly raised them again, like a theater curtain. I was to get to know that trick. That was supposed to make me roll over on my back with all four paws in the air.
  • She put a thumb up and bit it. It was a curiously shaped thumb, thin and narrow like an extra finger, with no curve in the first joint. She bit it and sucked it slowly, turning it around in her mouth like a baby with a comforter.

To sum up, throughout The Big Sleep, Chandler used similes and other literary devices to convey knife-edged topics without crossing the line into R-rated territory.

Cozy Mystery

Agatha Christie used literary devices to engage her readers without cursing or writing indelicate scenes. Also, her books birthed the sub-genre of crime called cozy mystery. We see her influence in more recent works, including Murder She Wrote, Midsomer Murders, Death in Paradise, and Agatha Raisin.

Draw the Line with Language

I’m pragmatic, not prudish. To prove my point, read the one-star reviews on Amazon. For instance, you’ll find examples of readers who dislike profane language as much as Louis L’Amour.

For example, here are a few excerpts:

  • I don’t read books or watch TV where God’s name is used offensively.
  • This is a trash, unreadable piece of garbage. Don’t waste your time on this grim pastiche.
  • I don’t like profanity in books. In fact, I find it a lack of intelligence. It was good up until about chapter 4, then I put it down.

Whenever I read such comments, I wonder:

How many potential readers were lost because of language?

Finally, in your writing, where do you draw the line with language?

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14 responses to “Draw the Line with Language and Write More Creatively”

  1. Bridgina Molloy the Wicked Writer, (aka abydos6) Avatar

    Yup, all of this. Even if I still use a little ‘bad’ language. ‘Darn’

    1. Grant Avatar

      Thanks for the boost, Bridgina!

  2. joylenebutler Avatar

    That’s the thing, if the bad language is missing, the reader doesn’t even notice. Nice post.

    1. Grant Avatar

      Thanks, Joylene. Wish I had a dime for every book deleted when surprised with unexpected language.

  3. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    Good summary. Definitely cozies come to mind, and they are now a sub-genre of almost every genre, don’t you think?

    1. Grant Avatar

      I agree, Jacqui, and the range of cozy mystery topics has expanded. I love books that keep you on edge without jarring you out of the moment with unnecessary language.

  4. Winter Betancourt Avatar
    Winter Betancourt

    Great post! I like the idea of the code of conduct for your characters, I struggle with cursing in daily life and it’s something I have to work to keep out of my writing. The last thing I want to do is offend anyone, it can be really shocking to come across that in a novel!

    1. Grant Avatar

      Thanks for the feedback, Winter. It’s a shocker when an author writes a series and starts dropping bombs after the first book or two.

  5. alexjcavanaugh Avatar

    Welcome to the IWSG!
    Outside of the word damn, I don’t use profanity in my books and I keep them PG rated. I want younger readers to be able to enjoy them as well.

    1. Grant Avatar

      Thanks, Alex. Glad I found IWSG.

  6. Julia Quay Avatar

    I don’t mind profanity if it’s not excessive and if it’s part of a character’s natural vernacular. Rhett Butler using ‘darn’ instead of ‘damn’ in his famous last words would have been a gosh-darn travesty.

    1. Grant Avatar

      LOL about Rhett Butler. Thanks!

    2. Janet Alcorn Avatar

      This is where I come down too. I also think profanity in fiction is like profanity in real life: when overdone, it loses its punch. When my characters curse, I want them to have a good reason, and I want the reader to sit up and take notice.

      1. Grant Avatar

        Thanks, Janet. As you noted, these are calculated choices and one size does not fit all.

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